Fic: Cycle One, Challenge One
Sep. 30th, 2010 04:40 pmThe votes are tallied over at
thegameison_sh, so it's time to de-anon and share my fic. I'm happy I was able to come up with something, considering all the difficulty I had with this challenge, but I can't help but be a little embarrassed when I compare my story with all of the other fantastic entries there. (Seriously guys: there's some AMAZING talent in that competition!)
( Strange Bedfellows )
Any constructive criticism as to how I can improve is, as always, welcome! Particularly, I'd like to know what you thought of my characterization: do the voices sound like Sherlock and John? Anything else you want to comment on, even if it's only to tear it to shreds, would be welcome as well.
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( Strange Bedfellows )
Any constructive criticism as to how I can improve is, as always, welcome! Particularly, I'd like to know what you thought of my characterization: do the voices sound like Sherlock and John? Anything else you want to comment on, even if it's only to tear it to shreds, would be welcome as well.